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| Red Tears Black Wings 2007-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseHey, Really good and strong. I know how you feel but I have only every screamed and cryed all night. It is a really good poem. Good Luck. ~Mandy |
| myalteredego 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, it;s a poem all right. And a damn good one too. I very much like the way you used underliines and italics to emphasize a word, rather than leaving it entirely to the reader's interpretation, which can always end up badly. I loved how it ended up with the description of the other sister, then the useage of the phrase "carbon copy." It really put a personal element into the poem. Very nice! P.S. Thanks for the reviews. |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abusegood job! |
| Fading Memories 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseYou know, this was one of the first poems I read from you. And it just makes me wanna hug you till everything's alright again! Cause it's way too sad, and I'm sorry you had to go through it. |
| Leaving Here 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseomg. so much feeling. so much realness. so much... greatness. great ramble. u have no idea. seriously, this is awesome. the last few lines... i can just picture it hapening. such a great impowering story. Liz |
| Alyssa's Attic 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. I like the rambling because it is like a stream of thoughts and so I can relate to it because of that. Thanks for the review - Alyssa ^^ |
| asteria24 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseOne word: heartbreaking! Two more words: great imagery! |
| Broken Petals 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI am so, so sorry that you had to go through any of this; but as horrible as an experience this was, you were able to take it and turn it into something beautiful. Sad, as always, but beautiful. It really is such a pleasure reading your poems. And this IS a poem. To me anyway. Great job. I was seriously so close to crying. Do me(and yourself) a favor and keep writing. P.S. I am proud to be your most faithful reviewer. XP |