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| NOT an emo freak 2008-01-30 ch 1,  | abusethats good. course, most slash stories seem to be well written by really deep peoples. good. |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI wish that that could be so true in reality. I'll try to do that myself. |
| Kailum 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseohmygod that was so adorably cute. I was laughing at the part where Brian saw the look between Julie and Will and thought they liked each other and he was tuning out XD There were a few spelling mistakes here and there though. Otherwise, it was aweesome ^_^ |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abusehee hee! cute! except the santa scared me a tad. i think a sequal would be kewl *hint hint* |
| Hemogoblin 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGIGGLE. Your story's given me a painfully huge smile on my face. If somebody startles me with a camera, it'll be stuck this way forever. Thanks. Thanks a lot. =D I'm such an American, but I love happy endings. Only one thing I can see to improve - maybe add more description about Will, Julie, and Brian? Also, how old are they? For some reason, Will and Brian seem a lot older than Julie, but at the end, it seems like they're the same age. Otherwise, great! And thanks for reviewing my story. =) |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAh fuzzy-stomach-story? :] this was really cute! I wish I had found it when it was actually Christmas. It would have made me smile loads more. Christmas is boring when you aren't a kid :( Anyway, this was really nice. It was lovely for a little one-shot fluffy thing :] made me smile Thanks for sharing! |
| magalina 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAW! This one was so cute! I loved it! Write more! ^o^ |