I LOVED it! I hope someday you write a novel about it!! (:

I've always been a fan of Cleopatra VII and this story has captivated my heart I shall be adding this to my favorites list.


T.S.Orr

Aww! How romantic! Very good! Very well-written! I like it!

Cleopatra and Antony's love has never been real to me, I don't know why. This, though, made their love real for the first time for me. Well done!

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I love this! It's short but sweet. I love how you took your own take on it. It shows that they really loved each other. *sigh* It's so romantic...

>.< Sorry, I'm sounding like a doof. Anyway, I like your use of actual history (like how they had children...all of whom Octavia took care of even though they were not hers. Poor Octavia...).

I feel that the best thing about this story is how the description really paints a picture. The verbs and adjectives used are very descriptive. (I now sound redundant...)

Very nice! I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Hm...It was kind of corny. The grammar was good. I know you can do better, E.