I want to hide in your bloodstream,

And dance with what makes you, you.

*glares* and for you to say that I have intense poetry skills lol...

This is nice. It's short and direct. I like the way it's written and how it all seems very vivid to me. Nice job.

Oh my God. "I want to hide in your bloodstream,/And dance with what makes you, you." These are the most powerful lines I've read in a long, long time. Amazing.

I loved the opening lines.