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That was a pretty terrible cliffhanger, but it was great action nontheless. Nic work.

Whoosh! That was a rush. I loved the writing style. :D

awesome story...would have loved to find out what happened but its cool nonetheless

Oh come on man! Tell me you have more to this, you cant end it here! This is one of the most fantastic gun fights i've ever had the pleasure of reading! Keep the writer's spirit!

Now that's some good action! Intense description of the fight, and it made for a good effect that you didn't describe the beast in full, just enough tantalizing hints to leave it up to the imagination. Very smooth flow of the entire battle, and the cliffhanger's heart-pounding. I can't wait to read some of your other stuff!