Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: A Wake Up Call!
dot.dottie.lottie 2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Kudos someone who finally gets it. If the legal system worked we would not need it. All legal systems fail, as they are based on impossible ideals that drain humanity out of humans. I am all for hunting down the police!
Isolde the Silent 2007-06-01 . chapter 1
Lame.
RuathaWehrling 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
Hahaha! This was excellently written. A very strong piece with a sense of over-dramaticism all the way through it. Well done!
Nobody Wants Reality 2006-12-21 . chapter 1
I like the way this flows. Its well well-written.

But One confusing aspect of it is that i dont think many people actually think badly of cops unless they have had a bad personal experiance with them, and sometimes even experiences are bias because the person is only mad they got in trouble for breaking a law in the first place, so this make the ending seem somewhat abrupt and unrelated to the rest of the essay.
Apollyion 2006-12-20 . chapter 1
Hahahaha. That had to be about the worst written document I think I've ever come across, seriously. First off your grammar is a joke, your sentence structure is almost non existant and your pathetic ramblings make no sense whatsoever.

LOL...silly kracker.
Typewriter King 2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Wanted to submit an essay like this titled 'Worst President Ever' that would come with the surprise ending "Woodrow Wilson," but then I kept adding explanations to the parallels between the contemporary presidency and Wilson's until I ruined it.

The KISS principal; serious business.
Formerly 2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Funny.
Mireille Caelarily 2006-12-18 . chapter 1
Surprising last line; from the first sentence, I was expecting it to be the religious. If it was about religion, I'd be able to agree, but I suppose I'm guilty of leaning toward the more moderate side when it comes to cops. Though I do see your point about the dangers of giving them supremacy - power indeed corrupts. I feel, though, that if, as you seem to claim, our society is advanced anough not to need peacekeepers and law enforcers, we ought to be able to come up with a more polite solution than killing all the cops in the world. That turns us into a police state the other way round, doesn't it?
Interesting essay and well-written, as always. Keep up the good work.
Return to Top