o! sounds like a good start to the sequel! they're getting married! what a weird dream! in the garden, how nice! i can't wait for more...WRITE MORE AND POST MORE NOW, NOW , NOW, NOW!
galaxyruler122490

Hmm...when I read this chapter, I feel like I'm missing something. I noticed in your author's note that you mention that this is a sequel...since this is your second story with these characters, you must be familiar with them, yes? But as a new reader, I have no idea who Beth, Devora, and Marc are. Maybe more characterization? And more background on the situation?