Ha, that was cute. Malls at Christmas are evil...

Heh, very funny and sweet! I felt kind of sorry for Jonah and his trouble finding a table - me and my friends would just have sat on the floor somewhere and got in everyone's way. Much easier. Anyway, I briefly feared for his sanity when Patrick vanished without a trace, but it was alright, he wasn't delusional. Particular love naturally goes to the fantastically crafted last line, and a very merry Christmas to you!

...I'm going to go and lie down now to try and lose the sugar high.

Flins not dead! Yay!

Awesome. Really cute. I loved the end. ^^

lol! I loved this one! And the name Jonah is awesome! Crowded places are annoying... Really great job!

Well... that was definitly cute xD; Really sweet story!