interesting

Really good, don't know what else to say :)

i really like the way you portrayed the attacks
it wasn't exactly like a story
more like an uncertainty
or something that happened.
you went more under the surface
good job

hmm. i like it. I have a September 11th poem too, but mine is not as good, i don't think. it's called the nevers, but it's more about a person than the actual event.
your poem is very good. good luck on being a poet. -Julia