so, i read a couple of your chapters, and it really lines up exactly to zettai kareshi ( absolute boyfriend ), the manga? i think you should change more things since this is kinda... illegal to do. unless you say from the start that its a RETELLING or something; it's just not right.

Too bad she didn't get any information. I wouldn't have gone out with Nathan if he made fun of me like the way he did to her after he rejected her the first time. Nice work. Keep writing!

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Ah, an interesting development. It's kind of sad to see Lucas gone. It's not like he has to be her boyfriend if he makes a return. Nice work.

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I'm betting Nick's leaving had something to do with his uncle. ;) Nice work.

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Interesting addition. Nice work.

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We finally get a lot of answers and he has to leave. That just isn't fair. Nice work.

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I'm wondering if Nathan and/or Giselle had something to do with the fire. You make things very interesting in a good way. Nice work.

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"You look like you lost your favourite thing in the world." That's irony for you. Oh, dear. I wonder what she'll do about the parents. Nice work.

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Well, this chapter kind of answered some questions, but it kind of didn't. Nice work on keeping the mystery going.

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That's mysterious. Why would he owe Nathan ten grand? Now I'm really interested.

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I wonder what Nathan's going to be like now. It doesn't look like Lucas is too happy with the kiss. Ah, the drama. :)

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I like the possibilities of Lucas's identity. Nice work with the kiss from Nick.

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It will be sad when she lets him go. Maybe she won't have to. Nice work.

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A fanclub? Now that is hilarious. Great job!

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I wonder what Nick's reaction will be when he finds out. I can see him liking her romantically. Nice work.

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