I really liked this. It seemed like it was written from the heart which is what made me like it so much because it can be hard for people to write stories/poems from the heart. It was sad as well made me want to cry, sort of.

...wow...um, I don't know what to say...it's really good...the feelings are very realistically portrayed. Nice work...I usually hate poems (they give me a headache, literally) but this one is really really good :)
Alex
PS: Sorry that this doesn't make much sense. I'm kind of in...awe, or something.