this is very unique to your other works. the format was beautifully done, the repetition of words is very powerful but not over done.

i wish i could put what i feel towards this piece into words, but i can't get them out. gah. but seriously, i do think this is one of your bests.

and girl, you bring me to my knees, shaking uncontrollably. yes. oh, how i remember. this was fabulous.

4th stanza is my fave. "someone who is so afraid//to be who she was" is just...what a ** amazing line.&, as always, i love your use of brackets. you somehow manage to pull it off in a way thats so clever & gorgeous & hauntingly captivating. ~Bex xx