Reviews for Faith Based Initiative

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Daydream Nation 2008-02-19 ch 7,	abuseThat's really, really cute and amazingly sad. I love how well you deal with the issues, making it realistic and somewhat horrifying. They make an adorable couple, too.
decline 2008-02-05 ch 7,	abuseomg this is so awesome T_T
KnittingKneedle 2008-01-27 ch 7,	abuseHi I'm with the review marathon...link on my profile! First off, this is one of my very favorite stories on fictionpress- I love the slow burning relationship between Chris and Ryan. Dialogue is really your strong point, it’s so natural sounding and the way you phrase the speech seems like there is a whole other dimension of subtext to scenes. The inner turmoil of angst is very realistic for Ryan, they seem a lot younger than twenty five somehow though. Little tiny nit-pick…you missed the ‘y’ in yourself “You’re not making this easier for yourself, you know,” he said kindly… I love the romantic element to this story, but I thought the chapter about evolution was wonderful about adding another dimension to the story, I hope both boys keep their faith but come up with a way to have their own interpretation of it. Write more! Please! I really enjoyed this story
Mareas 2007-10-05 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really like your story and I regularily check in for updates. Continue the good job. I want to see the boys breaking out of their mental prison
LaylaLivesLoosely 2007-09-17 ch 7,	abuseVery interesting...i hope to see more!
Mareas 2007-09-05 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really like the story and I'm looking forward to reading more of it. The guys are cute. ;-)
ddz008 2007-09-03 ch 7,	abuseGreat chapter! I wonder when they'll confess their feelings... and I'm sure that when they do things will surely be horrible, at least when someone discovers them. Ryan seemed to be really good with the kids and the animals... I had also thought about evolution and God XD Hope you update soon, please! :)
Aime Atem 2007-08-27 ch 7,	abuseVery cool. This is intensely interesting, and I can't wait for more!
Kar3b3ar 2007-08-26 ch 7,	abusevery interesting, i think i've seen these types of people on their bikes coming from door to door, i usually ignore them. but if their really like this, then maybe i was too judgemental.
Amerez 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abusethis is a really cool story, I'm glad I found it. Religion can be a tricky thing to write about but I think you're doing a wonderful job.
lalalalelelel 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abuseThat was really beautiful! The tention was palpable and that discussion about evolution was so pertinent... although the first part of that conversation scarily reminded me of when I came out to my mother.. weird... anyway... I think Evolution was a perfect, perfect, perfect starting ground for them and way for them to speak without speaking about what they're really speaking about. Does that make sense? Anyway, i was SO excited to see that you'd updated and I'd really not like to wait another two WHOLE months or more, and e! Thanks!
Inherent 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abuseI am LOVING this story so much. I'm so glad you updated because I was sort of scared you were abandoning this story. Not that I really have any room to talk since it's been forever since I've updated anything. But anyways, I can't wait to see what happens next.
magalina 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abuseaw, they´re so cute... :D Can´t wait for that to happen ^^ Glad you updated!!
write25 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abuseThat was really adorable! You did a great job writing the kids, they remind me of my Bible camp kids. The whole chapter was just very cute, and very realistic. So glad to see an update :) Keep it up! ~Mariah
fivestar ice 2007-08-23 ch 7,	abusesigh..i wish ryan had let chris finish his sentence! and the littel bit in the middle, where they are hearing from mr. jenkins, i'm guessing that it was a typo? and that you mean chris and I not, ryan and I? or are the POV's changing?

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