It may be a short chapter, but I hear rumors that this story is supposed to be longer... and longer it hsall be! I'll wait for the next chapters.

Anyway, I would like to say that I love your descriptions in this chapter! I could really tell what was going on, could even picture myself there in the busy New York street. I also like the title you chose for this story, it gives it just the right amount of mystery that makes an audience wnat to read it.