I like how you tell a story without getting caught up in fancy words of rhyme schemes. Also the feeling behind this is REAL. I hate it when people try to write an emotion they don't understand or have clearly never felt. Keep it up!

this one reminds me of my mom. and my family in general, but mostly my mom.

nicely done! very precise, clean and to the point if you ask me.

-pokes- lmfao you emo xD

anyway, i love he last two lines..they ring on very nicely, & the repition in lines "it's all because of you/all of you/because of you" is nice. Bex xx

WOW! EMO! SUWEET! Keep up the good work!

OMG! the last line just lingers...kinda ironic,no? "i didnt quit because of you, I gave up because of me" deep,man...

i can definitely connect with this poem. i like your line breaks, they work really well.

I enjoyed this, being able to relate a bit to myself and all. Nicely written. Cheer up :]