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| Full Stop. 2007-11-13 ch 1,  | abuseo. Thats really really cool. Utterly adore the last sentance. |
| Starving Artist 2007-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo me, this poem says "don't eat candy". Sugar-turned-blade...hmm. I like that, yet it makes me sad to think about. "It's comfort, it's solitude"...I like that too. Very few will actually get the meaning of this, I think. Or at least understand to the degree in which you mean. This is the style I like. Although, still, never happy, never loving...and yet both. |
| in a jar pk 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abusei've really missed reading your work!! i love this. as always. x |
| lackluster 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abusethe first few lines are obviously the best. ive got to say i loved the whole thing, though. it's like a taboo. gotta have it. |
| Guardrail 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written, I love the painfully vivid first few lines. Amazing images here, I really like this piece a lot. Great work and keep writing. |
| call me ish 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseit was sweet really, in that tragic sort of way that we all hate(to admit we love) the metaphors were beautiful and i don't think i've ever seen words dance quite like this. (truth or dare: doubles were always my first choice) |
| Countess Chocula 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThe first few lines are my favorite. You never fail to come up with a simply amazing poem. Honestly, this is just amazing. |
| Evil Zipper 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseonly a T rating?! try M! it reads really well, and i enjoyed the last two lines... but it's rather... risque... |