I think Alex is being way too serious about the Clay thing. Plenty of people are in relationships where one's older than the other so even if it's not that legal, it's also not that uncommon. The teacher thing is understandable, yeah, but not the age one. u.u Maybe this is just me wanting some Clay/Alex-ness.


Aw. I liked Bryan before I found out he was a daddy. D:

Thnaks. I really liked this chapter. The part with Bryan was my favorite. I just hope he can find a job soon and is able to get custody of Melanie. Sorry this is so small but I have a lot of school crap to do.
Squeedle

“You idiot!” That made me laugh... I don't know why.

Alex and Bryan sounded like they were a cute little pair. D: D'aw.

Alex and Clay are feeding my love for age gaps in relationships. Yes plz.

Ohsnap.

Clay's cute. I like him.

EW. IS THERE GOING TO BE HETEROSEXUAL-NESS!? OMIGAWD GROSS.
Just kidding. I hope Helena does help Andy. :)

Aww, for two reasons. One, your lovely reply and Two, how cute Clay and Alex are. So sweet. I'm still liking the BryanxAlex idea, even though it'll never happen. Poor, Gabe he is just THE SWEETEST EVER! His mom has cancer :( His dad is a MEANIE! And he has a cutting problem. I just love Gabe. He is THE b-e-st. (I did that on purpose :P) I felt like writing a REALLY long review! HAPPY UPDATING!! (Am I high?) So just saying that your story rocks, I strongly encourage gays (SO GORGEOUS) and for you to update AS SO AS POSSIBLE.

Then everyone shall be HAPPY!!

Sorry about the longness and the extreme weirdness. (If you knew me you would be use to it)

Blackened Blood

I hope so. It's like sometimes I know where I'm going with it and then other times I say to myself 'did I seriously write this? Where's the plot?' Anyway, Alex was so timid in this chapter it was adorable. And yeah from what I can tell, Clay is pretty spineless.
I feel bad for Andy and how he's stressing over what to do for the second date but because of that you can really tell how special Helena is to him. I have a suggestion for the third date if you want it. It's sappy and corny but it's an okay idea...I think. Anyway, they could have this little dinner/picnic by a lake and afterwards just sit there holding each other while stargazing. Okay, scrach that maybe that's a bit too sappy. Anyway, great chapter.
Squeedle

I know, I'm trying to speed up my process a bit but I got sidetracked by my English essay. I don't know why it struck so hard in the last chapter. I mean, it hit pretty hard when she was in the hospital but for some odd reason...I don't know. Anyway, YAY Clay's gonna give Alex a shot, I love it!! And I really liked the Gabe and Helena exchange in this chapter. I'm sorry to cut this review so short but I got some work to do with that story of mine. Hopefully it won't suck too bad.
Squeedle

lol I love Bryan in this one. He is so just like me! I also feel really bad for Gabe. My brother died of cancer at 32 so I know how hard that is to deal with. But at least he has Seth and Helena. HURRY UP AND GET TO THE DATE WITH HELENA AND ANDY! I can't take the suspense! I'm also glad Alex is happy again...he is kinda cuddley and cute at the end of this chapter! So get to sneaking them out on dates too...I have to say sneaking around with someone and trying to hide it from there parents can be fun but a little annoying... I had hide away from my fiance parents for nine months cause they didn't like me! It can get very sucky!

I haven't reviewed in a white!! Sorry, but I'm still loving it and who everyone's with. I feel content :) Please update soon and give me more amazingness!

Poor Alex! I can't believe that Clay did him like that...gr...I think he should go make out with Bryan, and make it all better lol!

Nah, FP just hates me because I haven't put any stories on here yet. lol. I will in due time though, I just have to put the finishing touches on a few things. Anyway, the fact that Gabe's mom is sick really hit me in this chapter. I mean, I knew she was sick before but for some reason it hit me harder in the chapter than any other. I'm glad Andy and Helena's date went well. I could practically taste Helena's happiness in this chapter. I loved how the Clay and Alex drama played out but I was really nervous for Clay though. I kept thinking that Shawn was gonna lose his cool and beat Clay's ass. Hopefully, Clay and Alex can get through it. And I hope there's a LOT more of Bryan in the next chapter. He's so adorable, I love him.
Squeedle

Hello!

Good chapter content wise. There were quite a feel spelling errors throughout and a whole slew of missing words and a couple misplaced or absent commas... other than that, beautifully done :]

I'm diggin' on the Andy/Helena line and the Clay/Alex drama. Uber juicy!!

wait... im corn-fused... so i thought bryan's kids name was melanie... so who is Becca again?

Cant wait for next chapter

EPIC ENDING! OH MY DEAR LORD!

there were a few parts that just didn't make sense as far as the sentence structure went, but the definately followed the story :]

oh my goodness, I know you say in the next author's note that this was kinda a fluffy chapter, but there were really and truly some moments that just took me by surprise and blew me away!

Kudos

Shook

Okay I still think Alex and Bryan are meant for each other but the clayness was kinda cute. Lol, I love when the dad burst in! Reminds me of the TIMES my father caught me doing something...only mine was a little naughtier :~)

I also love that you had something from Gabe which is wonderfulness! And the date was oh so filled with sweetness. My frist date with my now fiance (same one dad caught me with lol) was at a fair! I remember it so well cause I have naturally cold hands and I was complaining about them. And he took them and said: "Here I'll keep them warm." It still makes me all gushy inside five years later! So thank you of reminding me of that heartfelt memory!