Reviews for Mafias are Good at Keeping Secrets

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greek4lyf 2008-09-03 ch 10,	abuseHey, I like ur story heaps, but you make a contradiction about Andrew’s knowledge about Emma. In the 1st chapter Andrew says “this the girl?” as if he is totally clueless of the situation. Then this conversation is later on: "So do you know anything about the girl." Seth asked me. He had been the one that was in the house with me. Seth was a large muscular man; he was shorter than I was, but made up for it in strength. He had hazel eyes with dirty blonde hair that he kept in a buzz cut. "No, only that my dad told me that she was the only heir to the Tavor Mafia, big rivals to our family." And now in the report it says Andrew was assigned to work on her case. 2/12/04 Today my son was officially inducted into the family business. He has been assigned to work on a special case concerning the only heir to the Tavor Mafia, Emma Tavor. 4/26/05 One of my best men was killed today by David. He captured and tortured Greg Harrison, older brother of Jett Harrison, in attempt to gain information. He was unsuccessful in attaining information and killed Greg Harrison. 1/24/06 With the information that my son and others have gathered we are planning on kidnapping the daughter of David and Sheryl Tavor, Emma Tavor. So yeah, I just think you should fix that up, otherwise story is all good.
i loved your story 2008-08-20 ch 22, anon.	abuseit was soo amzing and i loved andrew and emma!!
lauren 2008-08-09 ch 21, anon.	abuseThat was a fantastic story! At first i thought Andrew was a right prick, but i nthe end i practically lovd him! I'm glad it could end happily! Again, it was brilliant!
AlfortJen 2008-08-06 ch 3,	abuseCool
jayc3218 2008-08-06 ch 22,	abuseWOW love the story i read it all in one day and the ending was amazing couldn't ask for a better one!
HelloLovely 2008-08-05 ch 9,	abuseI realy hope that she ends up with Andrew and not Mason. I eel like he's too much of a go with whatever anyone tells him kinda guy and I just like Andrew better. Love, Becca
I Murder on Impulse 2008-07-12 ch 21,	abuseHeh heh, cliche, but I love it anyway! xx
Shelbaybayz 2008-07-08 ch 1,	abuseI like it so far!
CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2008-06-26 ch 22,	abuseCOOL... good story...i liked it! very interesting and detailed! good work!
CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2008-06-26 ch 9,	abuseha the last part waz funny...the sky being orange...lollz
MamiPapi 2008-06-21 ch 22,	abuseVery heartwarming story!
geminibaby6789 2008-06-15 ch 22,	abuseThanks for the story! I love it! :)
Ambergirl1029 2008-06-07 ch 22,	abusewow this was more than i thought it would be at first i opened it for pure curiosity and then i became addicted i started this story at about eight this morning and am just finishing it now do to long paused and unwanted interruptions i have to say that i am in love with Seth and when the conversation about big heads when he said pudding that made my day utterly complete i loved it so much i was rolling on the floor laughing by its pure randomness and i would like to ask you if i could keep Seth i would never give him back i came to the conclusion of kidnapping him but I'm not sure if I'm strong enough to lug him to some private mansion considering his mafia will probably hate me lol so i decided to ask you maybe you can give him to me or let me borrow him for a very long time... lol tell me your answer soon i will wait stealthily and sneakily under your bed till then jk jk lol Sneakily, Amber
imaRIOT 2008-05-19 ch 1,	abuseIt was good, just WATCH YOUR GRAMMOR AND SPELLING. I cannot stress it enough. It actually gets annoying, because you should be a bit better at it... they're all actually silly mistakes. Just try your hardest to watch that. But not to worry, it's a very good plotline, I just hope it isn't too predictable.
BlackWolfCub 2008-05-12 ch 22,	abuselove it another great story. keep with the others - i have now read all yours stories today a very good day indeed!!

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