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Twilight Emo Wind Goddess 801 2009-10-27 . chapter 22
TEWG: Wao. I love this story. It took me about two, three days to read it and I'm satisified. I have to admit when the unknown guy was talking in his point of view I thought, 'Oh no, it's Seth... no it's Mason... no it's AIDEN! Yes, it's Aiden! It's always the quiet ones but then again Mason is quiet...' so as you can see I suspected both of them! :D
I Murder on Impulse 2009-10-15 . chapter 22
Aww this is an amazing story!!

xx
Ali
Forest Black 2009-09-09 . chapter 17
I realy think that you should try and publish this. It's one of the best that I've read up here.
i saw u wa gangsta ^_^ 2009-08-26 . chapter 1
man amazing story i loved it! It made me sad that Jett died and i had really started to like him after i knew where he came from. good work keep it up!
balloonfista 2009-08-25 . chapter 22
A fantastic, and well written story with a really intriguing plot! Love it!

Ri
grassong 2009-08-14 . chapter 22
sniff sniff
aww :[
very cute
i love the whole
stockholm syndrome concept here
very ... original?
well, i haven't exactly
read about it before.
good job :]
Jane 2009-07-29 . chapter 17
Oh! its either seth or mason...never saw dat coming!
okashay09 2009-07-28 . chapter 22
Thanks for this wonderful story!... im gonna check your profile and read your other stories!


^.^ your a fantastic writer

:D i also think its a great idea and dream that you want to be a doctor... i want to when im old enough, i jusat dont know what kind of doctore i want to be...
Ray 2009-07-14 . chapter 22
I don't know if you're still reading reviews, but if you are, this was amazing. Maybe you could be a doctor and write in spare time. Maybe even get published.
PerryThePlatypus 2009-07-11 . chapter 17
ahh who the hell is the mystery man!?!?
Sandy.H 2009-07-11 . chapter 22
Hi!
i just want 2 say u r an amazing author!!
im currently reading ur other story" my not so average life" and i just have 2 say ur ideas and the way u rite rocks!
it keeps us all glued!~!! u should definitely be an author
and publish many books!!i am sure u will be very successful!!
and i want 2 say tnx 4 taking ur time 2 write such a wonderful story!:)
Floppy125 2009-07-10 . chapter 22
I LOVED THIS STORY! FORTUNATELY I READ IT ONCE FINISHED. I COULDN'T HAVE STOOD FOR EVERY UPDATE. ANYWAYS... I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING! AND IT WAS A GREAT PLOT! AND I WOULD RATHER PUT THE STORY GENRE'S AS ROMANCE/DRAMA. =) GREAT STORY
punkproud 2009-07-09 . chapter 22
this story was super good
it had it's cute parts, and sad parts
Erica71167 2009-06-30 . chapter 22
Great story! I loved it!
Isabella Western 2009-06-27 . chapter 22
As i was reading this i heard the song 'Scar' by Missy Higgens.

It was so sad. I LOVED AND HAD COMPLETE FAITH IN JETT THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH, AND YOU TOOK HIM AWAY. JETT HAS FEELINGS TOO. YOU COULD HAVE DONE IT THAT IT JUST MISSED A VITAL ORGAN AND HE PASSED OUT FROM BLOOD LOSS INSTEAD, BUT THE NURSES AND DOCTORS CAME JUST IN TIME. OR THAT ANDREW GAVE HIS ORGAN OR BLOOD FOR JETT.

Why?

CAN U WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER (maybe even on a different story page thing, but related to the story) HOW JETT INJURIES WEREN'T FATAL.

Yeah I kinda love Caps Locks.

Love

xx Izzy xx
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