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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-07-12 ch 21,  | abuseHeh heh, cliche, but I love it anyway! xx |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far! |
| CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2008-06-26 ch 22, | abuseCOOL... good story...i liked it! very interesting and detailed! good work! |
| CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2008-06-26 ch 9, | abuseha the last part waz funny...the sky being orange...lollz |
| MamiPapi 2008-06-21 ch 22, | abuseVery heartwarming story! |
| geminibaby6789 2008-06-15 ch 22, | abuseThanks for the story! I love it! :) |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-06-07 ch 22, | abusewow this was more than i thought it would be at first i opened it for pure curiosity and then i became addicted i started this story at about eight this morning and am just finishing it now do to long paused and unwanted interruptions i have to say that i am in love with Seth and when the conversation about big heads when he said pudding that made my day utterly complete i loved it so much i was rolling on the floor laughing by its pure randomness and i would like to ask you if i could keep Seth i would never give him back i came to the conclusion of kidnapping him but I'm not sure if I'm strong enough to lug him to some private mansion considering his mafia will probably hate me lol so i decided to ask you maybe you can give him to me or let me borrow him for a very long time... lol tell me your answer soon i will wait stealthily and sneakily under your bed till then jk jk lol Sneakily, Amber |
| imaRIOT 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was good, just WATCH YOUR GRAMMOR AND SPELLING. I cannot stress it enough. It actually gets annoying, because you should be a bit better at it... they're all actually silly mistakes. Just try your hardest to watch that. But not to worry, it's a very good plotline, I just hope it isn't too predictable. |
| BlackWolfCub 2008-05-12 ch 22, | abuselove it another great story. keep with the others - i have now read all yours stories today a very good day indeed!! |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 22, | abuse=] so sweet =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 21, | abusethat sux =/ jet! =[ at least theyre getting arrested now =] her "dad" is a bastard |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 20, | abuseughh i was wrong =/ it was mason =/ i cant believe it! jett! =/ i loved him!! =/ and i hope andrew didnt die =/ please not |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 19, | abuseuh oh =/ whats gonana happen =// |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 18, | abuselol go emma! dissing all of em! lol and i know its seth =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 17, | abuseah! whos the traitor! its totally seth! =] |