as with all of your poems this absoluty blew me away - I love all of your writing thank you so much for sharing these works of art with everyone lucky enough to have found you on this site

Kira

good piece, more prosish than i like really. nice content, though far from my view, you expressed it well. good job on this, ttyl

It's so true. That war within that no one notices, except on rare occasion when the tears flow for apparently no reason. And they ask, "Why are you crying?" "I don't know." Yet, we DO know, but it'd be too tedious to extricate and too painful to produce.

Technically speaking, did you mean to say in the last line, "And somehow I shall with the war," or "win the war?" At any rate, I could relate. Truly... Tourterelle, relever de deuil of my own... (a fair day)

One of the greatest poems I've read in a long time! Very well written. Thanx for the review on Prayer!