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| mike damn 2007-01-31 ch 1,  | abusethis is pretty good |
| Mayaj 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseM I like. Love the rhyming scheme, and the subject's vague enough to be really hard hitting... if that makes sense. Excallent. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is just beautiful! Best Wishes |
| Xerophyte 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. I really love the "speckle flecks of pin pointed light" part. I thought the rhythm was off a bit, but that's just personal opinion. Anyway, this was an awesome poem! Thanks for your review, I have no idea what that is either. -Xerophyte |