aw this was so sweet! hey, tnx 4 the R&R!! i want someone to sing it to me...but if they kept singing it nite after nite...i think i might have an issue...i get cranky if someone wakes me b4 i wanna get up...including my nearly destroyed but still working alarm clock...poor soul. ^^v

Beautiful and so peaceful. The repeating is nice, and your word choice is very comforting. Suits the main idea of your poem well. Keep writing, k.

I Like this poem very much. The message is sweet and simple and it made me smile when I read it. This poem made my day!