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| Tearlit 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseFirst reaction "o *eyebrow quirks*" Second reaction "mildly disturbing but interesting" This somehow reminds me of a memory of my childhood, though it wasn't really a bad or upsetting memory, like one might assume from this particular poem triggering it. Not that this poem is bad, it is good and I like it it's just...a little scary. This is unusual and powerful and I want to know what inspired it. I especially like the part in italics. *claps* |
| magnusthewolf 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abusethis is actually pretty coolo. nice emotion :) and a good concept too |
| Promised Sword 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWow...beautiful and eerie at the same time. This just takes my breath away! A wonderful piece of work. My favorite line would have to be 'breathing (bleeding) singing (screaming)'. Completely took my breath away... Great job, and keep writing, Promised Sword |
| boys kiss girls 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseOhh... this is eerie. Like, creepy eerie. I like how it's written, but I don't like the literal subject matter. =P |
| water lily nymph 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abusewow, this is very creepy. it makes me think of someone who's posessed...maybe not like in the first exorcist, since that was really lame. this is more real, more fearful. geez, crank out any more poems like this and i might just crap my pants next time! |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abusebeautiful morbid. i LOVE it. |
| LovetheMadness 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseawesome. radically so. |