Talon, never got around to reading your story, but I hope to see it! Even if it is not my "Cup-of-Tea".

Wow that's one long story!
You sure do have an enthusiasm when it comes to writing.
I like the cliche'd creatures like demons etc
Also the unique names you gave your creatures towns etc
keep writing. i'm kind of surprised there aren't many reviews...
obviously nothing to Criticize on :D