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| LadyKaurie 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseGood poem. Watford? Which watford? 'cause I live in Watford, lol! xOx |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWHAT A COMEBACK! glad your back. excellent poem, but you should know that already. --sv |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThe references you make add a voice. This was really enjoyable. Your style is unique. Great job!! Stay well, Stephen |
| purplepants 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abusei love this. the descriptions are beautiful but sometimes it seems to wander because i don't feel like some of the things you mentioned were necessary. my favorite, "She basks in all the warmth of the room, the yellowness of it all, the Charles Dickens-esque wallpaper and the Romeo and Juliet carpets." very pretty. |
| belle.nisce 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAnother one of my favorites. This one stirs some sort of broken beauty, like perfection tarnished with rust. For some reason it also generates a 1950's vibe - perhaps because of the wallpaper and the vinyl. And the title is awesome. |
| MarvellousMarvin 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseoh wow i really loved this too! i love ur style of writing! amazing |
| beyond.that.horizon 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abusei. **. love. you. |
| luv me like no other 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really creative! |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, very different style than most of the poems i've read before. it's like a story almost. good work! keep writing |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, I'm blown away. Your writing is full of life and imagery, and it's so refreshing to find someone who takes a poem and tells a story with it. I'll definitely be adding you to my alerts and possibly favorites, too. Wonderful work. Keep writing! :) |