listen, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.

This is heartbreaking and beautiful. The last two lines are amazing. I truly love this!

this is my kind of poem, kind of depressing i know but, thats what i understand best. this is a wonderful peice of work. it is turely beautiful, great expression of emotion and flow to it. you deserve a HUG!

Yes, another one that I had to read. I love it too.

I really liked this, it was beautiful.

Aw! I loved this one! you did great again! -god bless-

*arkana*

This was beautifully horrific and dark. The images you have used are captivating and intense. I'm used to reading much longer pieces.. yours is slightly shorter than what I'm used to, but the length does not hinder this AT ALL. In fact, you have managed to express so much emotion, so much imagery in this poem, and every phrase in this piece weaves together to create an intricate and beautiful poem.

Wonderful use of imagery used in this poem! It really gave an interesting visual and had a very good flow to it - the dark theme is in it's own right quite beatiful. Good work!

I liked this poem.