My oh my! Now this one I really like! Written so well you can see them so easily in your mind.

aw.. sad ending... not what I was expecting.. beuatifully done

Thankyou so much for ALL your kind reviews,
and yes, I'm glad I checked out some of your newer stuff.

This is a really good poem. I can't actually think of another way to describe it... too many adjectives would just distract from the original message-
I wish I could write like this,
and tell such a beautiful story,
with never-ending skill.

Beautiful and so beautifully written as to be almost breathtaking.Passionate, sensual yet touched with an innate modesty and vivid imagery.How often are our doubts and fears traitors that spoil many a beautiful friendship?

I really like the tension in this poem. Also, the imagery is wonderful; I can see each sequence perfectly in my mind. I actually read this poem three times to make sure I got as much as I could out of it. The feeling overall is great :)

Wow. Simply brilliant. Verbose and enthralling. Your intelligence shines through this entire piece. Adding to favorites!