Reviews for The Seductive Loss Of Innocence

The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-10-23 ch 1,	abuseHm. At first, this incident seems like something unpleasant, like the man is doing something to the girl she doesn't want. But then, at the ending, it seems like she's enjoying it somehow. I liked the rhyming, and how you'd written a small story in this little poem! You have a gift for rhyming, so keep at it! This will go into my favorites! Your rhyming and storytelling makes it a pleasure to read! The Reverse Edge Blade
Mon Amour 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuseI like this poem:]
Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2006-12-21 ch 1,	abuseOh.My.Good.Gracious. How can you possibly not have given me this one beforehand? This is so romantically inclined... I'M SO PROUD OF YOU, ALERA! YOUR FIRST ALMOST-LOVE SCENE! And the imagery! I felt that I was the narrator, feeling his hands down my back and shivering with sinful and unsure delight as I feel his body burning like a deep fire, watching him become a monster before my very eyes. I love this. "And finally I beg upon My knees As you take me in your arms And we dance into history And everlasting time" This is my absolute favorite stanza, hands down. BEAUTIFULLY INSPIRATIONAL, LOVE! ~ARS