Reviews for His name was Big Daddy

mrskelley 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseI like it so far. Good Luck with the contest!
Inkspilled 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abuseWell, you might want to read over it to check on the few mistakes on it. But it's a good concept for a short story. Maybe try to add on things talking about him rather than the relationship between both of them. She misses him and would also think about him, himself. I think that you got most of the concept of it...:)