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| paradoxielysium 2006-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseI think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing! |
| The Voluptuous Innocent 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseBeing from the prairies where the wind is bitterly cold and cruel I can understand at least some parts of this poem. I won't admit to understanding it all because art is subjective. ;-) Anyway, I'll stop my rambling and get on with the review. This poem was haunting. I loved the use of sibilants in the second verse. It was as if I could hear the wind moving through the trees and the wheat/grass of the plains. Especially with line 6. Lovely! Hope to hear more from you! |