Intriguing... but strange at the same time. My only criticism is that you need to proofread more thoroughly. Some times there are spots where you are redundant or use the same word twice in one sentence. It is not a huge deal, but it sounds awkward. Other wise, keep up the good work. Please update soon.
If you would read my story that would be great. Here is the link, http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1383465

Wow, this chapter was deep. Come on, please post more, i know my reviews are in the same day, but this is a really great story. Well, have fun writig this. Oh, and why does she die again, i cant remember? *laughs* well, see ya round.

Well well well, it looks like i been down for a while. Looket me though, i finally got to register. ^_^ Any way, this is really good. Continue. Ceck out my first part of my story.

Your story's great. Sorry it took so long to get back to reading it it's really really great. i've been writin a couple of my own. I'll let you know when i post them. Tell me what you think

Great first chapter. Loved it. Sorry I never finished my review. It was really great, you had excellent detail, from Sisilia to everybody else. I'm looking forward to reading all the other chapters. NO ERRORS. (that I could see anyway)

This is a wonderful story so far!

Your characters are really well drawn, so they lead you along with the plot. The last exchange between Tianus and Sesila in this chapter in particular is very true-to-life and it's possible to almost see them talking together.

Besides, I love magic and dragons, so this is a gift for me.

^_^

Great story I'll finish the review tomorrow. Sorry it took so long. I forgot your penname.

I haven't had a chance to read it yet, but from the summary it sounds good. Especially with dragons. Favorite thing in the universe. I'll read and give an actual review on Monday March 10, 2003. On a school computer. Look forward to my review, it'll be good. see ya

good improvements.
I liked much

very good my dragonnita very good. I look forward to the rest.

Diablito

This chapter is also good! I hope more will be coming soon!!! I can't wait! :D

This is super good! I love it... on to the next chapter..... *sings along to her favorite song*

Hey there! Great story! I love it! I hope more will be out soon. I can't wait. Please pleas please please please pease pleas pease pease pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee have more out soon. Chow!

This is very interesing. It will, I hope, have another part?