oh. my. gosh.

Typically rhyming annoys me, because it tends to produce crap. But every now and then the rhyming can work so perfectly when the diction isn't cliche and it actually has something to say. This def. does and it's beautiful. I just can't explain how true and tragically gorgeous this poem is. It's so raw and simple, but it really hits home. I'm so glad I found it.
-Rachel
ps- thanks for reviewing my poem!