Reviews for Her Purple Gloves

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multiples of six 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is way too cute! I like the way the six-year-olds talk to each other. And the last line is just perfect. So adorable!
Ramenluver 2008-07-13 ch 1,	abuseReview Game! Since I already reviewed "Reality," and I owe you a double review, I decided to do this one instead. I'm glad I did. This was so cute. -^_^- 1.) "I’m going to tell her that you said the‘s’ word.”" There should be a space between the and 's'. 2.) "“Okay, time to exchange cards class!" I'm pretty sure there's supposed to be a comma between cards and class. 3.) "...Christmas Elizabeth." There is supposed to be a comma between those two words. You did a great job with their characterization when they were little, and I liked how it left off with "Merry..." and then picked up with "Christmas Elizabeth." when he met her again. Good job. :) -Ramen
The Prettiest Banana 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseThat is so cute. Simply adorable. ♥ Adding to faves. Bravo.
Written 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abusethis story is so adorable! I just love it :) thank you for writing. Oh, and I noticed that you're Muslim- me too. it's cool to see some good muslim writers out there. keep writing!
xxily4everxx 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseaw! wat a sweet story ^.^
Phantasia.89 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abusesighs Such a sweet story! Hope to read more of your works : )
Weirderest 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseAww, this is really cute :)
Lily Llynn 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseAh... cute and sweet and fluffy. It's an interesting - creative! - plot, and I love it. The characters, too, of course. (: I'm so glad xoxluurve suggested it, and I will totally add this to my c2. (:
Coda Lovelance 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, okay. There's a lot to say about this piece. I suppose, though it can just be wrapped up in "excellent". This is so great. You did a wonderful job. For the first half of the story, I really like how you combine sophisticated description with the youthful-ness of six-year olds. It makes for a really uniqe tone. I really wasn't expecting this to go past the line "And the little boy and girl went their separate ways, grumbling about how dumb the other one was, and completely forgetting about the purple-and-brown gloves that lay in the mud." but I'm so glad it did! It really brought the story full-circle. And the transitions as well as repetition from the first half to the second half totally add continuity and flow to the story. It's great! At the end, how you wrote it if a stranger... it just added something to the story. You could have actually had someone there, or just narrated it, but you found a way around the norm. and it turned out spectacularly! Overall, great job. Keep writing. You seriously have some talent!
Rosalina 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abuseAW, so sweet (: Wonderful little story. Just too cute and wonderful. Thanks for the review, by the way.
igloothree 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was so adorable! I loved that he found the gloves for her in the end. So sweet. =]
Beautiful Destination 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abuseAw...this was SO cute! It made me so happy :)
darlingnicotine 2006-12-27 ch 1,	abuseOMG, this is so cute! I love everything about it! Especially the fluff! I love the title most of all though, at first I thought it was going to be an elegant girl at a fancy restaurant wearing pruple gloves or something. Oh, but it turned out to be such a cute little porcelain doll instead! Haha, that's cool. Well thanks very much for reviewing my story, it made me laugh, your reviews. You should start a new story, considering you're a muhc better writer than me, uh huh. Well TTYL, XgainMyAgainX
Liquid-Sorrow 2006-12-22 ch 1,	abuseOh so cute! I love it. =D -Lqd
Shina Laris 2006-12-22 ch 1,	abuseThat was very, very adorable. I enjoyed it very much. =)

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