that is wicked sad

whoa this poor psychic, telepathic angel dude.

i don't know if u are aluding to a real myth or not but whoever decided on the boy's punishment was an idiot and Decius deserved what he got. its such a sad ending!

Woah! now that was something else. i like the style. the imagery. the different points of view. and the lions. though its a shame they died and a tragedy that it was because of the boy. there's just this feeling of helplessness about it so far.

How sad... A fascinating power the boy has, this 'angel' of yours. At first I'd thought your Decius a decent man, but after the beating he gave your Angel, I changed my opinion a bit...

Lovely in all ways,

~Ciao, Ayaerhis

Its sad but written very well. I like it.

It's very sad. i kind of wished that the lion's would of lived to save him... but I am also looking forwards to having more Decius and the boy conflict. In other words, it was a very good beginning and i hope you don't give up on it. Though, i think you spelt Angel as Angle... which confused me before i understood what was wrong with the word. That aside... it seems like a very interesting story you have planned. From what i gather it's going to be Slash right? If that's the case i suggest putting a warning on your summary, lots of people will come and read it but don't like slash, they will be disapointed or even a bit angry for not having a warning. I however, don't mind it at all so no worries. Waiting for the next update soon.

-z

This story is great. It makes me want to cry a bit but it's great.