Ahem. This might have been a tiny bit better if it was on Family Guy or Southpark..
It just doesn't look right in writing..
I can just imagine everyone looking at the red headed girl and it's all silent for a couple of minutes, then suddenly the mum says "So who wants a Manwhich?"..
Anyhow yeah.

This is kinda Ironic that I'm reading so much about Michael Jackson the day after he died.

Well my dear Kayla, you know what? I don't care if this story makes you throw up or not. Really, I DON'T. Within time, I've learned that if I have nothing nice to say, I better not say anything at all. And I've been here WAY too long to give a crap about what you think of my story. I wrote this like two years ago. It's pretty old. Get over it.
If you like it, great, if you don't, GET OVER IT.

Morphine is a liquid drug that a doctor gives you. This isn't funny, especially not chapter 7. I kept reading hoping that you would improve but had to stop at this chapter. You fail and your story makes me want to wretch.

ahahahahahahahahah OH.MY.GOD. THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I wasnt sure where you were going with the parody at first with the morphine and advil and yoga stuff but the ending is HILARIOUS!!

~silent

lmao XD wth? that was funny though

These get mildly funny - but then they continue on just a smidge too long. Timing is everything.

I'm sorry, but I don't find this funny, only annoying. I have a very large sense of humor. This, however, did not make me laugh...not one bit.

frappicino's taste like crap

morphine is more or less a liquid drug only allowed by prescription.

i think ur missing the point at wat a parody should be and is...

Hahaha, like, OMIGOD, this was so ** hilarious!!
I loved this part;
"I know how Cheeze Its are made."
-cue crickets in background-
"How?" the woman asked after two hours of silence and stares."

HAHAHAHA, WTF, 2 HOURS! sry, but i cracked up XD
and this one, i LOVED how u kinda described her like a bimbo, lol

"LIKE, OMIGOD!!" the girl screamed. "A GIANT CHEESE JUST RAN OVER MY BOYFRIEND!!"


aww, i miss U. and your craziness :)

That was kind of funny.

I'm trying to write some hummer storys myself.

Ps. Her kids are dolts.

OMG

that was extremely stupid. but everyone loves stupid!
i never liked pop-tarts