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| Franziska 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseDa stimmt alles: kein Wort zu viel, wie es bei einem guten Gedicht sein soll. |
| relapse into change 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abusei like this, it's lovely my favorite were the first two line |
| average-psycho 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusebittersweet. I like it. your strongest line is "and razor blades in my mind-" can`t think of what else to say. |
| bukangliwayway 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseaw, love. |