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| xXFinal FallenXx 2008-09-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome!! I wish more people would write about bands. It's eloquent and I think Ink is such a smartass that it's so funny. |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseomg cute cute cute! xx |
| sae 2008-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse~ I simply loved to read this one-shot. Somehow you just created the atmosphere so that I just knew how it would look if it was a movie. idk~ |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseHaha I really like Charlie! |
| cbprice25 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseHa ha! Not bad. I definitely enjoyed it. |
| britty-tt 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI love one shots and your seriously the best at them! I love Dashboard :D and I am seriously in love with Charlie's personality. I look up to all chicks that can be that badass |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusetee-hee. That was ADORABLE. I loved it. Like, REALLY. (: "Ink-lings" |
| oh y'know.that girl 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseCool...a good one-shot. I'm a fan of short stories so yay, this is definitely a favorite! |
| gulistanlik 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This is brilliant! You never fail to amaze me! So, she's had a thing for Ink since the beginning, eh? Wow! And the thing with her opinion on conformism and not believing that we are not affected by other people- way to go, girl! Keep up the good work! Oh and this is definitely favourited! gulistanlik |
| centenarian 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseLike this story. Yes but what annoys me is that you just reminded me that whenever people hear dashboard they all like, you know. Oh, you're trying to be emo whatnot and they'll go insult you and so on. Well, i'd like for once to say, "I like dashboard" without those add ons. I do like them, what's wrong with that?! They're pretty good after all. okay, enough about that. yeah...good story so uh, yeah. |
| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseSerious "Nick and Norah's Ultimate Playlist" vibes here, and not in a copycat way, either. I love it! Just two comments: (1) The name, while my reason for reading this, is a bit too long for the story type. I really shouldn't be talking because all of my titles suck, but it just seems too silly; and (2) Charlie's lack of grammar makes her dialogue awkward. She is clearly intelligent, and yet talks as if she...isn't. Some snappy retorts, but even those are phrased oddly. Oh, wait, make that three-- Ink wouldn't be that clueless that she likes him, so the "need to rethink this crush" line is infinitely cheesy. But again, this is the best romance I've read on fictionpress. Ever. Great band name, by the way. Did you make that up? |
| HelloLovely 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAh! I love it. = D Love, Becca |
| cls81690 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseGenius! Hilarious! Adorable! I love Charlie, and Ink is funny as heck. |
| Sweet Child 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was a nice piece. I like Ink. He's... cool. As for Charlie, she was really interesting. And don't you love it when a girl knows how to play the guitar well? Sadly, most really good guitar players are guys. Anway, loved th one-shot. |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Nice job. =) |