Aww... Poor dears. It seems you've had none to review you yet! So I shall be the first! Kasumi knows me from DA as ayaerhis. Here, I'm Pyreflei. You described to me the rough outline of the story, and I thought it was interesting. It seems I was not wrong in my assumption. It rather reminds me of Eragon in a way, the whole being chosen, the invasion of the village by a strange gathering of people. Stolen children for some dark purpose. You seem to have thought this out for some time coming. I promise to put it in my favorites to observe it's progress! Good luck!

~Ayaerhis