wow jajaja me encanto lo d los titulos d los capitulos... y la historia creo q aunq sea poema esta excelente jajaja indescriptible ahora si no se q opinar es como un chocolate es muy chiquito y no te tardas nada en comertelo pero es una d las cosas mas ricas q hay

"My heart feels like winter when you’re not around
It’s cold & it’s freezing in the middle of this Christmas-spirit
Guess sometimes I need you around."



God. This is exactly how I feel sometimes. Best lines EVER.
Good job.

tan simple y tan bonito como me gusta, con un muy bonito sabor a navidad que espero de verdad que aparezca en la impresion enero del diario alexander. ese ultimo parrafo, hay que cumplirlo hay que cumplirlo, uno tiene q sentirse identificado con las cosas para agarrarles el gusto jaja y a mi me agrado bastante

Christmas is so much simpler
(& so much better)
It’s you & me lying naked on your unmade bed
As everyone else open their presents downstairs.

the best!
so many things in a few lines! so simple and so complex and th same time!

AH! I think this one and the second are my favorites!!
Write more poems! BEsides, very adhoc with the time!

este me recordo Nightmare Before Christmas... the happy feeling in thy heart... nice nice

My reviews will sound all the same cause I'm word-tired... anyways, I realy liked this one... it's just... I don't know... it gets to me. excellent last verse.

Woot! Awesome... loved the pretty much e.v.e.r.y.w.h.e.r.e. part... :D

Tenderness..

Y'know, I really wished I had someone to dedicate this stuff to... maybe Robin? :D

You liar! Liar liar pants on fire! this poem isn't sexual, it's just bloody tender!

Christmas romantic crimes.

This poem made me feel like getting physical on Christmas XD