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| The-Caitiff 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Very well done. I loved your depiction of God though your grammar and syntax could use a touch of work. A custard earth... Interesting. |
| Mel-Dog Moody 2006-12-25 ch 1, | An entire Earth made of custard? That was random. It was funny non the less. |
| AglairaTheFate 2006-12-21 ch 1, | Oh my god, I'm cracking up. That's so...bizzare, it's hilarious. Write more! |