That was a really good story. And i mean REALLY GOOD. I wonder, is the girl in this story the same girl that appears in your other stories about the Martian Empire? And i must admit, it was sort of creepy too. I mean, all alone on a desert planet? It was really well written and i could visualize everything that happened. This should get published.

I've got to admit, i did not look at the title wheni clicked on this, the summary drew me and the story kept me. Your tale is quite captivating and well pace, it was only near the very end that i found myself wanting to jump to the end to figure it out and while i glanced a few paragraphs ahead i came right back to wher i was a continued on in ignorance till the end. I really like this story, though i'm tempted to ask for an expansion, i won't as this is one of those that truly stands on its own.
thanks for the read.