Reviews for The Prophecy: Beginning

Reviews For: The Prophecy: Beginning

marieko 2008-09-24 ch 21,	I love the story! I have just read the first part and I can´t wait to go to part 2. Maybe you should consider making it a series of books and publishing it. It´s really good! I would definitely buy them
marieko 2008-09-21 ch 5,	I'm at chapter 4 right now, and I already love the story. It's like I'm reading a Harry Potter book, that's also very well written and it makes you want to read more and more... If you don't like HP, sorry...but I do, so it's a compliment! The only thing keeping me from reading on is bedtime...I'm tired! I'm going to continue reading tomorrow, hopefully.
Lady Katreina 2008-06-23 ch 21,	Oh. My goddessnessiticity! Just six words. As good as "Queen of Ice". (No joke. My gosh you're good! INCREDIBLY good. Thank you so much for making and posting this story!!)
slpng 2007-04-29 ch 1,	First of all, I really like this story of yours! I think it's a great plot, and you've managed to make it seem relatively convincing. Good job! But! (of course there is a "but") I think your story is missing something. It's the way you tell it. Try to be more detailed. Perhaps things such as environments and surroundings seem boring, but I assure you, it helps luring the reader into your universe. Include more feelings and thoughts from the characters, their reactions to certain events. It doesn't have to be through dialogue. And you need to emphasize more on the unique parts of your story, such as the "magick", and the history of this gifted people you have created. It's really inspiring and fascinating to read about, so I'd recommend that you write some more about that, though you already have explained alot of it. But overall, I really, really like your story. It's now added to my favourites, and you're on my Alert list for when you continue this epic tale! Feel free to message me if you'd like, I'm always willing to further explain myself and this tad bit of advise! Good job, and good luck!
KimHua 2007-04-29 ch 21,	Intriguing. I'd be interested to hear your views on the spirituality aspect of your story - you seem to have woven quite a few different references in there...
KimHua 2007-04-28 ch 11,	One thought: I love the name of your heroine - it seems incredibly apt. Personally, I pronounce it "rain" - I assume that's correct. :-)
KimHua 2007-04-28 ch 10,	Nice. You have a good way of keeping the reader guessing! (or rather, of giving so few details that the reader has almost as little clue about what's going to happen as Moira does! grin)
KimHua 2007-04-28 ch 5,	Hey, I'm enjoying this. Lots of mystery. But chapter 4 is repeated within itself. (sorry if that's not very clear - have a look and see)
CarlyJo 2007-04-05 ch 16,	I wondered how Daphne and Edmund were doing. Great update. I was wondering how you pronounce Rane? UPDATE SOON!
CarlyJo 2007-04-04 ch 15,	This story is really great. It is one of the few stories that take me to the setting and make me feel like I'm there. The characters seem real even with the special abilities. The romance between Greg and Rane feels real and for some reason I sense something between Moira and Cedric. I don't know if I'm right, but it's just a feeling. I don't understand why people aren't reviewing this. Awesome job, keep up the amazing work and UPDATE SOON! =:3 )
CarlyJo 2007-04-03 ch 3,	Seriously, I have only read the first two chapters(Prologe and Chapter 1) and I'm already hooked! Why are pepople not reviewing!? This probably has a ton of hits and only two(now three) reviews, right? This is a great story so far and I'm off to read more. Happy Writing and I'll review at the end of chapter 14 or is it 15, at the end of the last updated chapter. =:3 )
Julia 2007-03-31 ch 12,	Wow... Dude... I'm speechless. I haven't read a story this good in like...FOREVER! This is AWESOME! OMG! I can't believe that people don't reply more often. This is amazing! You should TOTALLY publish it when you're done! I'll be the first at Boarders to buy it! I love it! I love ane and Greg and...everyone! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I'm so hooked it's not even funny. UPDATE PLEASE! This is positively the best story on here!!
Stephanie 2007-01-18 ch 1,	Wow...I have no idea why no one has reviewed this yet! It seems like a really good story and I am glad that I get to be the first reviewer!

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