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| magnusthewolf 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abusevery nice concept here, i definatley understand the writer's stance on this piece. nice emotion too. good job. keep writing! :) magnus |
| Guardrail 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI love the flow to this piece, and your voice here is very well used. Awesome job and keep writing! |
| Artemis Obscure 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abusePowerful, and rather painful stuff! |
| Inkspilled 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseIt's smart and rhymes pretty well. I like it. :) Most of it works well together and I don't think there's anything wrong, but maybe parts could be questionable... |