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| Galemir 2007-10-08 ch 1, | I love this poem. Sort of like a Cannibal Corpse song. I'd like to maybe put this to music and use it on my band's next album. Any objection/comment, please email me. :) |
| Ana 2007-07-10 ch 1, | Am I supposed to get that? - Head-tilt. - What?! |
| Damned Dead Eyes 2007-05-16 ch 1, | Very well written! I love it. Hmm, not bondage, so I wonder what exactly you would call it...? |
| mriss 2007-01-10 ch 1, | this is so...poignant. i don't know how to describe it otherwise, it's . . .such a GOOD poem. amazing poem I seriously have to say. but if your thinkin moral sides -which who gives a fuck...- it's not exactly hm like it's not really usual. which makes me LOVE it. it's so unique it itself! amazing job! -mriss |
| Xinta Kitsune 2007-01-04 ch 1, | W-w-wow. That...is indeed kinky. *huggles* And I luffle you for it. O_o I think I've heard of this kind of thing before. Dunno what it's called though. I love it fer some reason. Although has some caps issues. o.o *has never critqued juu before* |
| Chocolate Ninj4 2006-12-23 ch 1, | Damn. That was... disturbing. Umm... I liked the rhyming. Obviously you did something right for it to have an effect (and it was more than just the subject matter). |