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Galemir
2007-10-08
ch 1,
I love this poem. Sort of like a Cannibal Corpse song. I'd like to maybe put this to music and use it on my band's next album. Any objection/comment, please email me. :)
Ana
2007-07-10
ch 1,
Am I supposed to get that? - Head-tilt. - What?!
Damned Dead Eyes
2007-05-16
ch 1,
Very well written! I love it. Hmm, not bondage, so I wonder what exactly you would call it...?
mriss
2007-01-10
ch 1,
this is so...poignant. i don't know how to describe it otherwise, it's . . .such a GOOD poem. amazing poem I seriously have to say. but if your thinkin moral sides -which who gives a fuck...- it's not exactly hm like it's not really usual. which makes me LOVE it. it's so unique it itself! amazing job!
-mriss
Xinta Kitsune
2007-01-04
ch 1,
W-w-wow. That...is indeed kinky.
*huggles* And I luffle you for it.

O_o I think I've heard of this kind of thing before.
Dunno what it's called though.

I love it fer some reason. Although has some caps issues.
o.o *has never critqued juu before*
Chocolate Ninj4
2006-12-23
ch 1,
Damn. That was... disturbing.

Umm... I liked the rhyming.
Obviously you did something right for it to have an effect (and it was more than just the subject matter).
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