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Moondog Dozier
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseThere are many social truths in this. It raises important questions about both humanity and modernity. When did the world decide to focus on the negative more closely than the positive? It seems to be the scapegoat mentality of finding flaws, and concentrating on the the failures and shortcomings of others. Very relevant to the current social and psychological atmosphere that is pervasive in todays increasing dependence on cynicism. Great conceptualization of the thought. Well written. MD:77.
A Beautiful Yearning
2006-12-27
ch 1,
abuseHi, I was reading through and one of your thoughts really spoke to me:

What’s left in the end,

But simple shallowness?

Is “human nature”

A two-word, two-bit excuse

For our faults?
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