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| ignominy 2007-08-20 ch 1,   | this one is very good. it has the rhythem and the feeling, and people can relate. not much to critique, if you ask me. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2006-12-23 ch 1, | It just...ends. There is no closure at the end...until then, it's very nice. |