You're so good with words and where to put them! I really admire that^_^

-Sapphire

I could never write anything like this. Ryhming does not come easily to me, but you did a great job!

-Sapphire:)

"...of no return." Now THAT was so Phantom of the Operish! Haha. I love how you gave 'life' to darkness and death. It gave the poem all the more depth.

I will try and read a chapter everyday!

-Sapphire

this is my favorite poem in this collection...
i love the idea of sirens,
they are deadly,
but still they are alone.

i like that its from the view of a sailor,
makes it seem more...
believable?

Narnian winters are the worst kind. You never know when they're going to end. This poem was very emotionally vivid and easy to relate to. (The potrayal of the emotion is vivid, that is, not the emotion itself) "I just wish I could hear the music once again" was especially resonate with me. Lovely work.

My first thought while reading this was "Madness? Cliffs? The Cliffs of Insanity! The Princess Bride! Weasley!" I settled down after that and relized that I often feel the same way. Drained and hanging on to my sanity for what feel like no reason. Good use of metaphor.

There all great poems, I could put a review to all of them but the holidays have made me a lazy writer. Good stuff.

Wolf.