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| bitterlyysweetchoco 2007-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful! Not completely somber and angsty. which I luff look at me =D |
| notated descant. 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abusea bit of a critique here... this was quite good, except the thing I found about this was that your rhyming scheme was a bit vague for me. It makes the reader double take, to check if it was supposed to rhyme. But overall, it was quite good. It gives a relaxing setting. Keep on writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!) |