how sad. (obviously). it's fun to play with how i read this one...i can slur all the words together, or i can read it broken (as you've written it). the first method makes it sound nicer, but i don't think that's the point, is it? i think the point is that the subject is broken...so the poem is broken. very nice.

nice.sad.

The last word by itself is very powerful. Well expressed. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^