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| Brinneh 2006-12-21 ch 1,   | how sad. (obviously). it's fun to play with how i read this one...i can slur all the words together, or i can read it broken (as you've written it). the first method makes it sound nicer, but i don't think that's the point, is it? i think the point is that the subject is broken...so the poem is broken. very nice. |
| bukangliwayway 2006-12-21 ch 1, | nice.sad. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-12-21 ch 1, | The last word by itself is very powerful. Well expressed. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |