That was so sad... But great job.

Aw! *tear* *cry* That was sad! But it was really good! It touched me!

I loved it. Zoey is too sweet. Great job. :D

You're right. It was a very interesting way of telling a story. Not exactly my taste, but I liked reading it and enjoyed the storyline.

It was a good job with just a few spelling errors :)

Keep up the good work!

Hm, interesting, I like it. I don't really understand permenant bruises, but then again, I don't know everything. If you're going to keep going that would be pretty cool. Good job.